By looking at both of my products, I can see a great improvement. Firstly by the use of colours as, through lots of research, I realised that to make my magazine look professional I had to stick to 3-4 colours to attract people. My college life magazine used a variety of bright colours compared to my main task that only used purple, black and white which gave a more professional outcome. Through this I have learnt the colouring forms and conventions of the magazine industry.
The second way in which my main product was better than my college life magazine is through my punctuation and grammar. My first attempt used exclamation marks in the cover lines as well a lack of punctuation. When making my main product, I used more sophisticated punctuation to ensure my magazine was grammatically correct which ensures a professional brand creation. I learnt here to importance of creating a band and sticking with a consistent house style
My photography has also improved. I used a college setting in my first attempt which presented a very poor picture as it look unprofessional and messing which meant that when I done my main task, I came to the conclusion to use a studio. Due to the use of Photoshop tools, I was able to change the brightness and contrast of my image to ensure that it stood out and that the lightly looked professional. The use of the spot healing brush improved the models skin to sell the lifestyle of someone who looks after themselves.
The cropping tool helped me cut out my image and put it on to a white background which is much more attractive than my college magazine as I used a coloured background which looked very immature and poor quality.
I also improved the layout of my magazine to a more professional look. I clumped together my cover lines on the right hand side of my cover which makes it easier to locate and improves the ease of reading against the white background.
I carried on using the banners at the top and bottom of my page but made them much smaller to allow my image to be bigger which makes it stand out more.
I also changed the location of the price. Students are attracted to low prices which is why I put my price in an emphasising shape to stand out. On the other hand, my audience is different for my Espoir magazine which is why I placed it just under the masthead like many other magazines already being published in the industry.
My masthead has also changed more due to the change of target audience and genre of magazine. I used a much more beautiful looking font as the main product is most aimed a females compared to my college magazine which was not gender biased.
The second way in which my main product was better than my college life magazine is through my punctuation and grammar. My first attempt used exclamation marks in the cover lines as well a lack of punctuation. When making my main product, I used more sophisticated punctuation to ensure my magazine was grammatically correct which ensures a professional brand creation. I learnt here to importance of creating a band and sticking with a consistent house style
My photography has also improved. I used a college setting in my first attempt which presented a very poor picture as it look unprofessional and messing which meant that when I done my main task, I came to the conclusion to use a studio. Due to the use of Photoshop tools, I was able to change the brightness and contrast of my image to ensure that it stood out and that the lightly looked professional. The use of the spot healing brush improved the models skin to sell the lifestyle of someone who looks after themselves.
The cropping tool helped me cut out my image and put it on to a white background which is much more attractive than my college magazine as I used a coloured background which looked very immature and poor quality.
I also improved the layout of my magazine to a more professional look. I clumped together my cover lines on the right hand side of my cover which makes it easier to locate and improves the ease of reading against the white background.
I carried on using the banners at the top and bottom of my page but made them much smaller to allow my image to be bigger which makes it stand out more.
I also changed the location of the price. Students are attracted to low prices which is why I put my price in an emphasising shape to stand out. On the other hand, my audience is different for my Espoir magazine which is why I placed it just under the masthead like many other magazines already being published in the industry.
My masthead has also changed more due to the change of target audience and genre of magazine. I used a much more beautiful looking font as the main product is most aimed a females compared to my college magazine which was not gender biased.





